I don't know what to say, like, all of the girlies down there did there job. I don't know how to describe it, but, I just love how you made the mc just a woman, not that complicated pronouns shit, no hate but that's my opinion! And I'd like to tell you that I spend THREE days playing it to see all the endings and dialogs, I even slept with my laptop in my lap LOL, like, this game is so amazing it spent time with me, and I can't even move on I'm literally OBSESSED. I dug so hard in the game to the point I explored a bad ending???? like (spoiler)
that weirdo SA us?? and we avoided Lane? the thing that confused me that our BB didn't even tried to check on us? like that confused me as hell, and I expected him to save us before that weirdo can do anything to us like a hero or something but lmao no one came, so we just K!lled ourselves?! that was too dark I didn't expect the game to turn to this dark side.
other than that, the game is soo goood!! like I can't wait for more!!! love yaaa!
woah i didnt watch the tv but i still didnt get it. do i need to answer lane's call? or is there another specific thing i must do to get the bad ending
Ah yeah, you need to go into the store without BB otherwise you'll be going into BB's route cause u spent alone time with him, it doesn't need to be the call, you can also respond to his text to assure you get him into the storee
thank you SO much pookie :3 yeaah! for the story its necessary to be a woman and idk i dont wanted to make it "neutral" i wanted the players to FEEL theyre a woman. i think it changes a lot a story whether youre a man or a woman and thats why i wanted to do that :3
uhh I'm just like spitballing here heh uh what if in like in an alternative universe uhh what if there's a route where hypothetically donimate Lane and hypothetically get the option to hypothetically aggressively flirt back...? hypothetically ofc (✿◕‿◕✿)
*SPOILER FOR EASTER EGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MADE AN ACCOUNT FOR THIS GAME THIS IS INSANELY GOOD. woof for both of the love intersects bb is so nonchalant and mysterious wow/sarc but no acc hes so fine, im js confused on how he stated hes not ugly but also stated MC wouldnt like his face, babes idc if he looked like a rotten trash bag his protective-ish personality makes up for it LOLOL and for my fine babe my amazing lane?? at first i was like yeaaa im so gonna hate him... but dude no oml i like him sm maybe more than bb but we havent seen more info of bb.. so i like em both equally for now!! can i just pick both!! im obsessed with everythin oml uhdqeiuduhqwudquiwu also u have rlly nice character writing style, every character is well written and you paid attention to making everything you say/pick lead up into another situation!! i cant find the code :c yet..
ik its in the store bathroom but im so sosososo stupid rn LOL
made a whole account for this.. um i love this pls finish it i lit finished the entire game routes in one sitting... haahhaha im obsessed with how you wrote each character im going crazy i need both of them at the same damn time
i am already writing a lot these days pookie! :3 maybe shift 3 will be finished before the end of the year :3 (thank you so much, writing them was the hardest part ngl xD)
I went into this thinking id like the biker boy more and then LANE SHOWS UP HOT DAMN- anyway this game is fantastic your doing amazing i cant wait for shift 3 <3 (plus i love what you did with lanes backstory its very peak)
lanes hot + funny fuck me. In all honesty, this game takes an interesting approach to storytelling and navigation, particularly as an interactive experience. I love how the story builds upon itself and keeps me curious for more. Plus, there's a diverse set of characters in terms of personality, like biker boy being a sweet, shy person in contrast to an arrogant and raunchy person like Lane. Overall, can't wait for the final release of this game!!
Lane girl here! What a masterpiece. This man has me so downbad for him that Biker Boy's interference irritated even me. Lane annoys and charms me at the same time I can't wait for Shift 3 help me...
DIDN’T FINISH THE GAME (im on shift 2) BUT I HAVE TO WRITE A REVIEW BECAUSE THIS GAME IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO 100000/100000 IT LITERALLY MADE ME GIGGLING, BLUSHING WHILE PLAYING. LOVE U DEVS
I'm usually pretty indifferent to the visual novels I play, but this one? It actually hits different. LIKE, BB is just so dayum good 😝 I hope your pillow is cold on both sides 🙏🏻🙏🏻
Nah actually what happened when i was gone, wdym theres a code and stuff, weren't we all talking about how we stan Lane more than BB. I mean that's where the comments where was when shift 2 first released, can someone give me some info about the code. Like from reading the comment's i see theres a hidden code thing (i'm assuming it's an easter egg) and we have to rename ourselves to it? As in restart the game and rename in shift 1 or? Also how do you know if you've found the code as well, does it tell you or-? I do know from the comment's it's in Mad Dog Convenience, though i'm pretty sure i found it but dont know how exactly to apply and determind if it's right. Also who found this, gng the information took me by surprise.
I spent the whole week studying, but anxious to play! I drew one in my own style and another in yours and I’m absolutely obsessed with everything! I did every ending and hunted down every tiny detail I could. I love your game and I seriously love you for making it.
I got out of 'Shift 2' totally fixated on Biker Boy and after playing it I low-key started crushing on Lane too! ☠️ WTF — I used to hate that jerk, how is he making me laugh this hard? Biker Boy’s adorable and Lane’s hilarious, I want both!
I didn’t expect my feelings to flip like this, but I guess I just didn’t know Lane well enough. You nailed the character development and I’m so happy about it — I have SO MANY QUESTIONS! Instead of clearing up 'Shift 1', you sent me off with like 50 new theories 🫵🏻
OMGGG THIS IS SOO BEAUTIFUL AAAAAAAAAAAA THE EYES HEART LMFAOOO XDDD<3 THANK U SO MUCH BESTIE!!<3<3 i think EVERYONE became a Lane lover bc of shift 2 tbh xDDD!! SOME QUESTIONS WILL BE ANSWERED ON SHIFT 3 DW x)
I freaking LOVE when he looks like that, he’s TOO CUTE. I couldn’t not draw that iconic expression. And listen, I’ve been burned by devs who just gave up before, don’t you dare stop, we NEED more of this! But take your time, okay? Luv ya <3
i'm so in love with this game!! it really does feel like the choices you make matter with all the different dialogue you get as a result (especially at the end of shift 2), which is something i find rare in most visual novels—not to mention the navigation feature of the store and MC's house. i'm so excited to see more <3
ngl im an avid consumer of visual novels ever since i was in highschool till now that im a full grown working adult, so u can just guess how many ive tried lol. i wasnt expecting much since tbh im picky with prose and dialogue but this was amazing from start to finish! I LOVE how you wrote the two bad dogs, especially Lane. He is so consistent as a character and his flaws make genuine sense. Its not there just to make a cliche checklist, i feel like he really is human and complex. I understand MC so much! Like....I wanna strangle Lane so bad but he can be so freaking funny and charming too...like wow i wanna kiss him but also slap him in the face and knock him down several pegs.
I cant say much about biker dude since i barely know him but he is so cute! Im so curious y he's deranged for MC and his character, you know...his POV at the end of shift 2 was such a big tonal change from how he is with MC. SO CONCERNING! SO DELICIOUSLY RIPE WITH LORE.
Edit: i just finished a BB branch...WTF wow so theyre really both chauvinistic pigs. I'm crying it was so jarring from this "nice" guy persona. That part where he got mad at MC was like being drenched in ice it really struck that part of me when i was younger and had to carry the men...Hes not wrong its just...it makes me really mad he saw that you know? ugh like...its just touches that raw part of you that wants justice but maybe you stopped hoping for it because it never changes anyway and u had to swallow the patriarchy and keep your head down as a woman and u wanna just strangle people who sees that weak, oppressed part of you because its humiliating. UGH the way MC just has that fawn response ingrained into her in conflicts with men...I GET HER SO MUCH...Amelia lets build a woman utopia fr.
Im heartbroken about Amelia and y she has become so cold to MC... SO MYSTERIOUS I MUST KNOWWWW. The fallout mustve been about something terrible
I also love MC she is such a breath of fresh air! she isnt a wilting flower, she's funny, can dish out as much as Lane can give, and her lines are charming too, i can see why Lane and biker boy like her!
ALSO! This whole yandere/obsession men have is definitely DRENCHED in misogyny i AM SO GLAD you've written it so expertly in game. Like wow ive never seen a piece of yan VN where this is so clearly stated again and again. I love your characters so much and I am in love with the way you write. I like how you show rather than tell and sprinkle in lore in a way thats believable and natural. I hope you never stop writing I am such a huge fan of it and I will definitely follow all your creative work from now on
OMFGGG SUCH AN HONOR!!! i am so HAPPY you liked it pookie!! i was seriously about to cry when i read your comment xDD writing is definitely the hardest part, but knowing that all my effort was worth it really encourages me to work even harder <3
dont worry, i am already writting shift 3 and you are so right about how i "show rather than tell" cuz shift 3 will be A LOT about that xDD!! thank you SO MUCH!!!! <3<3
girllll i stalked ur tumblr, and all the comments here HAHA OMG U LIKED Forcefully yours too!!! I was just thinking BB reminds me of Lionbright from Forcefully yours when i played for the first time, and i was kind of comparing how much i liked BOTH of fuzzycuff's writing style and yours! I love u guys equally btw!!! I miss riker so much, i hope fuzzycuffs is okay.
i'm buzzing lol i hope time speeds tf up because i want to read it all from start to finish and devour all the lore! but srsly, as Lane says "im gonna wait so hard baby" XD (im gonna bark so good ,baby)
i loved this game so much everything was perfect, the tension , the writing , the atmosphere i could actually inmerse myself into the story and it made me feel lots of things i cant wait for the next days this game is so underrated, it deserves more love
yall i need help 😭 I THINK IM JUST A DUMMY BUT I CANT FIND THE SECRET CODEEEE gah.... :(( do any of yall have any steps that i could follow? i could have sworn that it could possibly be by the staff door entrance but i clicked everywhere and found nothingggg
«to have that scene you have to have a date with Lane but DONT flirt with him, then ull end up in the neutral route during the beef and you have to choose "stop them both" :3!!»
i've finish all the the route and omg i love it so much. it's more realistic and we can really appreciate the characters more and not too rush and putting some development between the characters and how some outcome do not lead the same way (i really like slow burn romance, got me giggle and kicking my feet ><). it only shift 2 but i still want moreeee. the game is very good and nice, not too heavy on the plot and idk or it just me the game is very relaxing except for the jumpscare of course :P. one question though, do we really can't accept the dare when Lane dare us to drink the alcohol? because i was hopping we can. shhgdgdsh (i'm not being a creep i swear). but if we can't it's fineee ^^. one last time, thank you creator for making this game and hopping to see more of your game in the future.
so heyy im back with my mc drawing<33 its not really good but i just wanted to show my admiration for your work hehe:) ( idk how to render btw 🥀) i’ll draw the others too:^ *only if i have time *
THATS SOOOO BEAUTIFUL OMGGGG THE AMELIA WRITTEN AWWWWWWW shes a love interest too btw!!! :3 she is absolutely GORGEOUS POOKIE!! <3<3 thank you so much!!! <3<3<3<3 I LOVE UUUUUU :3
it might be me being a wuss but i'm actually crazy scared in some parts of this game!!! intentional or not i was lwk dying when i had to do stuff by myself. i accidentally unpaused a video on my laptop while i was checking the employee entrance and i nearly shit myself since the guy speaking in the video was full on monologuing.
this is a fire game though i'm so glad i decided to give it a try i'm like the #2 lane fan i could fix him (i could not). bbd has crazy good writing and i've been up for like 4 hours playing and replaying this whoops
also i accidentally died in my first playthrough!!! whoops!! my bad for wanting to pull lane away!!!
Oh goodness THE HIDDEN BACKGROUND IN THE STOCK BATHROOM!! It took me so long to discover I genuinely started thinkinh y'all are talking about something else entirely but then I just started clicking on every part of the screen in the bathroom and ohhhhh
I FINIHSED THE ONE ROUND OF PLAYTHRU N IM FNA DO ALL CHOICES NOW: GOD LIFE IS WORTH LIVING: I LITERALLY LOVE YOU FOR THIS!!! Im assuming we wont have as much lane (since he alr got lotsa screentime in sh2) in the next shift cuz of the different schedules.. ugh im going thru a lane withdrawal </3. this was so enjoyable. i love this. fav game
to have that scene you have to have a date with Lane but DONT flirt with him, then ull end up in the neutral route during the beef and you have to choose "stop them both" :3!!
Girliepop you are amazingg loved playing through the 2nd shift ( ˶˘ ³˘)♡
Have been waiting for it for a month and it was worth it, every character seemed so complex and detailed and I cant wait to find out more about them and also the mc's past in the future shifts
Love our little cutie patootie BB want him need him cant wait for more of him
and I really thought the weirdo had died(or killed) in the first shift since the news showed someone dying
***MILD SPOILERS AHEAD***
I had a few questions 🥺👉👈
1. how any shifts will be there in the full game??
2. are Amelia and Lane siblings???
3. does romancing Lane always lead to the bad ending or did i miss something??😔💔
i romanced BB and got him drive to drive me home 👁️🫦👁️💅
being neutral gave me the ending of going home by bus
about romancing Lane, you need to watch TV before going to bed in shift1 (so that you won't risk walking home in shift2).Or you can get dead drunk during Dare with Lane, and then Lane and BB will send you homeXDD
When in the coffee shop with Amelia, choose "something else" (whiskey), and reply to Lane's message in shift2 and go on a date with him, then you can unlock "Accept the dare" and drink your vodkaXD. After BB and Lane start arguing, you need to side with BB as much as possible (at least twice on BB's side), and you can get a drunk ending.
OHOH AND During your date with Lane, try to choose options that lean towards him or flirt with him as much as possible!!! Be close enough to Lane so that BB can show up with a sullen face; otherwise, you'll enter the branch line where the two shake hands.
I'm SO obsessed with this game! I really thought I'd hate Lane at first, but he actually grew on me! I said "STFU" to my screen whenever he said stupid shit, but I can see that he's not that bad. He just needs to grow the fuck up lol. I managed to get onto his route without even knowing so I'll try out BB's route now. Can't wait for Shift 3!
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I don't know what to say, like, all of the girlies down there did there job. I don't know how to describe it, but, I just love how you made the mc just a woman, not that complicated pronouns shit, no hate but that's my opinion! And I'd like to tell you that I spend THREE days playing it to see all the endings and dialogs, I even slept with my laptop in my lap LOL, like, this game is so amazing it spent time with me, and I can't even move on I'm literally OBSESSED. I dug so hard in the game to the point I explored a bad ending???? like (spoiler)
that weirdo SA us?? and we avoided Lane? the thing that confused me that our BB didn't even tried to check on us? like that confused me as hell, and I expected him to save us before that weirdo can do anything to us like a hero or something but lmao no one came, so we just K!lled ourselves?! that was too dark I didn't expect the game to turn to this dark side.
other than that, the game is soo goood!! like I can't wait for more!!! love yaaa!
There are times i forget this game has horror lmaoooo
i need tips for the bad ending omg
Uh don't watch the TV so MC doesn't know the risks and stay neutral with both love interests
woah i didnt watch the tv but i still didnt get it. do i need to answer lane's call? or is there another specific thing i must do to get the bad ending
Ah yeah, you need to go into the store without BB otherwise you'll be going into BB's route cause u spent alone time with him, it doesn't need to be the call, you can also respond to his text to assure you get him into the storee
alriiight tysm <3
SLEEPING WITH UR LAPTOP ON UR LAP WHAAAT XD
thank you SO much pookie :3 yeaah! for the story its necessary to be a woman and idk i dont wanted to make it "neutral" i wanted the players to FEEL theyre a woman. i think it changes a lot a story whether youre a man or a woman and thats why i wanted to do that :3
ALSO! anyone know how to see the red helmet scene?
it's in shift 2, after the shift when you wait at the bus stop you and BB should meet again and he'll offer to take you home, and agree!
What Haniexe says but make sure you watch the TV so you take the bus home and talk with scarlet. I think that guarentees you the choice.
Wait, I tried doing that but nothing happened, I just went home and the shift ended??
okay so , refuse the number, watch the tv then dont text lane back, while doin tasks inspect bbs bike at the back of the store
Ooh okay, got it! I was so close I just didn't refuse the number, thanks a lot for the tutorial
just be on BB's route, offer him the umbrella or the shelter and ull have it :3
(i deleted ur comment, HOW DARE U LOOK AT MY PRECIOUS FILES!!!)
(i am kidding xD)
ooo so im right hehe, i will keep it a secret for u dw
Now i'm curious lmaoo, it's fine pretty sure we'll be able to see it in due time
hopefully the creator will add it soon ^^
uhh I'm just like spitballing here heh uh what if in like in an alternative universe uhh what if there's a route where hypothetically donimate Lane and hypothetically get the option to hypothetically aggressively flirt back...? hypothetically ofc (✿◕‿◕✿)
i will add more flirt back options for the Lane girlies population x) <3
YAYY THANJ UUUU ꉂꉂ(ᵔᗜᵔ◍) (⸝⸝ᵒ̴̶̷̤ꇴᵒ̴̶̷̤⸝⸝)
*SPOILER FOR EASTER EGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MADE AN ACCOUNT FOR THIS GAME THIS IS INSANELY GOOD. woof for both of the love intersects bb is so nonchalant and mysterious wow/sarc but no acc hes so fine, im js confused on how he stated hes not ugly but also stated MC wouldnt like his face, babes idc if he looked like a rotten trash bag his protective-ish personality makes up for it LOLOL and for my fine babe my amazing lane?? at first i was like yeaaa im so gonna hate him... but dude no oml i like him sm maybe more than bb but we havent seen more info of bb.. so i like em both equally for now!! can i just pick both!! im obsessed with everythin oml uhdqeiuduhqwudquiwu also u have rlly nice character writing style, every character is well written and you paid attention to making everything you say/pick lead up into another situation!! i cant find the code :c yet..
ik its in the store bathroom but im so sosososo stupid rn LOL
Good luckkkkkk, i personally love the easter eggs in this game, it's such a treat!
I FOUND ITTTT , also i noticed how the moon is mentioned, and also when we talk to bb about the sky we say smth ab not likin the moon? hmm
Maybe hehehehhe, soooo many comments are for Lane, makes me feel bad for BB ;w; We need to give more love to him toooo
ikr?? but when i defend bb and lane is sad i feel so bad like oml kill me i cant pick.
Oh lmao, i love seeing Lane sad, it was his fault we were drenched in the rain ykwim
made a whole account for this.. um i love this pls finish it i lit finished the entire game routes in one sitting... haahhaha im obsessed with how you wrote each character im going crazy i need both of them at the same damn time
i am already writing a lot these days pookie! :3 maybe shift 3 will be finished before the end of the year :3 (thank you so much, writing them was the hardest part ngl xD)
u did so well icl!! will be drawin fanart.. where do i submit them!!
i am a lot active on Tumblr, its on my profile!! u are so sweet!! :3 <3
really loved the game. Finishing it left me empty... not lying
WHATT DONT SAY THAT!!! xD
Hopes? Dreams? I survive to live the day, hour, minute, second, of BB's face and backstory reveal.
Good game ;3 worth to play. Naturally, a story needs to build tension and expectation, you understood the assignment... but NOT THIS HARD SIS OK
THANK UUUU POOKIEE!! :3 <3
I went into this thinking id like the biker boy more and then LANE SHOWS UP HOT DAMN- anyway this game is fantastic your doing amazing i cant wait for shift 3 <3 (plus i love what you did with lanes backstory its very peak)
the comment section is infected by Lane lovers... poor BB... xD (THANK YOU POOKIE, i promise ull have a lot more about Lane :3)
YESSSS THANK YOU TWIN >:D
lanes hot + funny fuck me. In all honesty, this game takes an interesting approach to storytelling and navigation, particularly as an interactive experience. I love how the story builds upon itself and keeps me curious for more. Plus, there's a diverse set of characters in terms of personality, like biker boy being a sweet, shy person in contrast to an arrogant and raunchy person like Lane. Overall, can't wait for the final release of this game!!
THANK YOU SO MUCHHH <3 :3 i wont disappoint!! x)
UR WELCOME!!! (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)
omfg this is so good
Lane girl here! What a masterpiece. This man has me so downbad for him that Biker Boy's interference irritated even me. Lane annoys and charms me at the same time I can't wait for Shift 3 help me...
honestly, understandable pookie xD writing Lane is sometimes SO funny xD
DIDN’T FINISH THE GAME (im on shift 2) BUT I HAVE TO WRITE A REVIEW BECAUSE THIS GAME IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO 100000/100000 IT LITERALLY MADE ME GIGGLING, BLUSHING WHILE PLAYING. LOVE U DEVS
Tell me if your a BB stan or a Lane stan after hehehe
OKAY I HAVE PLAY THE GAME 2 TIMES AND DEF A LANE GIRLIE. Hes just too fine…
LMAOOO, where are my BB girlies but i do understand where your coming from lol. He's actually so good at fliting and when he blushes its sooooo cute!!
BB girlie here <3 im literally obsessed
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH THANK U BESTIE SO GLAD U LIKED IT AND U LOVED LANE<3
I'm usually pretty indifferent to the visual novels I play, but this one? It actually hits different. LIKE, BB is just so dayum good 😝 I hope your pillow is cold on both sides 🙏🏻🙏🏻
THANK UUU POOKIE :3<3
Nah actually what happened when i was gone, wdym theres a code and stuff, weren't we all talking about how we stan Lane more than BB. I mean that's where the comments where was when shift 2 first released, can someone give me some info about the code. Like from reading the comment's i see theres a hidden code thing (i'm assuming it's an easter egg) and we have to rename ourselves to it? As in restart the game and rename in shift 1 or? Also how do you know if you've found the code as well, does it tell you or-? I do know from the comment's it's in Mad Dog Convenience, though i'm pretty sure i found it but dont know how exactly to apply and determind if it's right. Also who found this, gng the information took me by surprise.
pookie if you put the right code, it sends u directly on the easter egg dw x) (its like Lane erased BB existence fr)
please whats the code ive been trying to find it for atleast an hour dude 😭
Ngl and hour sounds like nothing tee hee, i've spent more looking for the rest of the easter eggs
Soo you know the code? Please tell :]
Yeah, I found the code when looking for easter eggs but didn't know it was a code just thought it was part of the thing.
Spoiler:
It's in the bathroom
Okay TYYY, glad i didn't get spoiled lol
may i ask where to put the code? 😭
instead of ur name in shift 1!! :3
I spent the whole week studying, but anxious to play! I drew one in my own style and another in yours and I’m absolutely obsessed with everything! I did every ending and hunted down every tiny detail I could. I love your game and I seriously love you for making it.
I got out of 'Shift 2' totally fixated on Biker Boy and after playing it I low-key started crushing on Lane too! ☠️ WTF — I used to hate that jerk, how is he making me laugh this hard? Biker Boy’s adorable and Lane’s hilarious, I want both!
I didn’t expect my feelings to flip like this, but I guess I just didn’t know Lane well enough. You nailed the character development and I’m so happy about it — I have SO MANY QUESTIONS! Instead of clearing up 'Shift 1', you sent me off with like 50 new theories 🫵🏻
I LOVED MYSELF IN YOUR ART LINES (I tried to make it) <3
I FREAKING LOVE ITTTTT YOU ARE SO GORGEOUSSS <3<3<3 u even did the stockroom AWWW XDD<3<3
STOPPPP you’re making me blush, I’m happy you liked both! I made them just for you.
OMGGG THIS IS SOO BEAUTIFUL AAAAAAAAAAAA THE EYES HEART LMFAOOO XDDD<3 THANK U SO MUCH BESTIE!!<3<3 i think EVERYONE became a Lane lover bc of shift 2 tbh xDDD!! SOME QUESTIONS WILL BE ANSWERED ON SHIFT 3 DW x)
I freaking LOVE when he looks like that, he’s TOO CUTE. I couldn’t not draw that iconic expression. And listen, I’ve been burned by devs who just gave up before, don’t you dare stop, we NEED more of this! But take your time, okay? Luv ya <3
LOV U BESTIE :3 <3 i wont give up dont worry <3
i'm so in love with this game!! it really does feel like the choices you make matter with all the different dialogue you get as a result (especially at the end of shift 2), which is something i find rare in most visual novels—not to mention the navigation feature of the store and MC's house. i'm so excited to see more <3
thank you so much bestie <3<3 your choices will matter even more on shift 3 (for obvious reasons xD)
I Never thought Id find a Biker Boy dressed all in black and covered in tats cute but you did it. I loved this
THANK UU POOKIE!!<3<3
All deserved doll. Cant wait for whats next
I AM SOOOO OBSESSED WITH THIS! OML!
ngl im an avid consumer of visual novels ever since i was in highschool till now that im a full grown working adult, so u can just guess how many ive tried lol. i wasnt expecting much since tbh im picky with prose and dialogue but this was amazing from start to finish! I LOVE how you wrote the two bad dogs, especially Lane. He is so consistent as a character and his flaws make genuine sense. Its not there just to make a cliche checklist, i feel like he really is human and complex. I understand MC so much! Like....I wanna strangle Lane so bad but he can be so freaking funny and charming too...like wow i wanna kiss him but also slap him in the face and knock him down several pegs.
I cant say much about biker dude since i barely know him but he is so cute! Im so curious y he's deranged for MC and his character, you know...his POV at the end of shift 2 was such a big tonal change from how he is with MC. SO CONCERNING! SO DELICIOUSLY RIPE WITH LORE.
Edit: i just finished a BB branch...WTF wow so theyre really both chauvinistic pigs. I'm crying it was so jarring from this "nice" guy persona. That part where he got mad at MC was like being drenched in ice it really struck that part of me when i was younger and had to carry the men...Hes not wrong its just...it makes me really mad he saw that you know? ugh like...its just touches that raw part of you that wants justice but maybe you stopped hoping for it because it never changes anyway and u had to swallow the patriarchy and keep your head down as a woman and u wanna just strangle people who sees that weak, oppressed part of you because its humiliating. UGH the way MC just has that fawn response ingrained into her in conflicts with men...I GET HER SO MUCH...Amelia lets build a woman utopia fr.
Im heartbroken about Amelia and y she has become so cold to MC... SO MYSTERIOUS I MUST KNOWWWW. The fallout mustve been about something terrible
I also love MC she is such a breath of fresh air! she isnt a wilting flower, she's funny, can dish out as much as Lane can give, and her lines are charming too, i can see why Lane and biker boy like her!
ALSO! This whole yandere/obsession men have is definitely DRENCHED in misogyny i AM SO GLAD you've written it so expertly in game. Like wow ive never seen a piece of yan VN where this is so clearly stated again and again. I love your characters so much and I am in love with the way you write. I like how you show rather than tell and sprinkle in lore in a way thats believable and natural. I hope you never stop writing I am such a huge fan of it and I will definitely follow all your creative work from now on
OMFGGG SUCH AN HONOR!!! i am so HAPPY you liked it pookie!! i was seriously about to cry when i read your comment xDD writing is definitely the hardest part, but knowing that all my effort was worth it really encourages me to work even harder <3
dont worry, i am already writting shift 3 and you are so right about how i "show rather than tell" cuz shift 3 will be A LOT about that xDD!! thank you SO MUCH!!!! <3<3
girllll i stalked ur tumblr, and all the comments here HAHA OMG U LIKED Forcefully yours too!!! I was just thinking BB reminds me of Lionbright from Forcefully yours when i played for the first time, and i was kind of comparing how much i liked BOTH of fuzzycuff's writing style and yours! I love u guys equally btw!!! I miss riker so much, i hope fuzzycuffs is okay.
i'm buzzing lol i hope time speeds tf up because i want to read it all from start to finish and devour all the lore! but srsly, as Lane says "im gonna wait so hard baby" XD (im gonna bark so good ,baby)
YESS I HOPE THEYRE OKAY!! <3
im working on shift 3 everyday dont worry! i hope to release it before or on my birthday (its on december 17 :3) <3
How many shifts will be there? ^_^
there will be around maybe 6 or 7 ♡
why I can‘t turn language to Chinese😭 if I can‘t play this game my good qualities will disappear
the translation isnt done yet pookie!! i will add it as soon as its finished !! :3
oooooooook！！I‘m waiting forever ever ever ever……
i loved this game so much everything was perfect, the tension , the writing , the atmosphere i could actually inmerse myself into the story and it made me feel lots of things i cant wait for the next days this game is so underrated, it deserves more love
thank you SO MUCH sweetie, warms my heart :3 <3!
How to get BB CG "hands up"????
u cant pookie, i havent put it in the game yet xD!!
DAMNIT I LIKE ALL OF THEM
yall i need help 😭 I THINK IM JUST A DUMMY BUT I CANT FIND THE SECRET CODEEEE gah.... :(( do any of yall have any steps that i could follow? i could have sworn that it could possibly be by the staff door entrance but i clicked everywhere and found nothingggg
is the secret hidden backroom the stall in the bathroom???? I JUST NEED A YES OR NO BECAUSE IM GOING INANE LOOKING FOR THIS CODE 😭
its in the washroom of the store YES POOKIE XD!!
secret code for whattt
for an easter egg
I like the new story very much. I love you.❤️❤️❤️
And can you give Lane a happy ending? I don't want him to die.TT😭
WAIT? wdym hes gna die...
i wil see muehehhheheheheh...
uahh its rly good, but how do you make them shake handsss??
POOKIE!!!
«to have that scene you have to have a date with Lane but DONT flirt with him, then ull end up in the neutral route during the beef and you have to choose "stop them both" :3!!»
ty smm<3
i've finish all the the route and omg i love it so much. it's more realistic and we can really appreciate the characters more and not too rush and putting some development between the characters and how some outcome do not lead the same way (i really like slow burn romance, got me giggle and kicking my feet ><). it only shift 2 but i still want moreeee. the game is very good and nice, not too heavy on the plot and idk or it just me the game is very relaxing except for the jumpscare of course :P. one question though, do we really can't accept the dare when Lane dare us to drink the alcohol? because i was hopping we can. shhgdgdsh (i'm not being a creep i swear). but if we can't it's fineee ^^. one last time, thank you creator for making this game and hopping to see more of your game in the future.
THANK YOU SMMM POOKIE!! :3 <3
NO! you can actually accept his dare! with Amelia during the flashback you have to choose "something else" option!
actually choosing to accept his dare unlock a whole new branch during the beef between BB and him! :3
LE GASP thank you much !!!!!!! the little detail tough! aaaaa
so heyy im back with my mc drawing<33 its not really good but i just wanted to show my admiration for your work hehe:) ( idk how to render btw 🥀) i’ll draw the others too:^ *only if i have time *
THATS SOOOO BEAUTIFUL OMGGGG THE AMELIA WRITTEN AWWWWWWW shes a love interest too btw!!! :3 she is absolutely GORGEOUS POOKIE!! <3<3 thank you so much!!! <3<3<3<3 I LOVE UUUUUU :3
THANK YOUU:) I love You Tooo<33,i'll draw and post the others on my X ,IG and maybe tik tok too :33 . I'll always be there to support you Cutiee:>
I loved playing this, im so curious about what BB looks like. i wonder if we will ever find out
THANK UU POOKIE :3 you wont, maybe only his eyes tho xDDD
it might be me being a wuss but i'm actually crazy scared in some parts of this game!!! intentional or not i was lwk dying when i had to do stuff by myself. i accidentally unpaused a video on my laptop while i was checking the employee entrance and i nearly shit myself since the guy speaking in the video was full on monologuing.
this is a fire game though i'm so glad i decided to give it a try i'm like the #2 lane fan i could fix him (i could not). bbd has crazy good writing and i've been up for like 4 hours playing and replaying this whoops
also i accidentally died in my first playthrough!!! whoops!! my bad for wanting to pull lane away!!!
LMFAOOOOOOOO U GETTING SCARED XDDD im like the #99999999999 Lane fan btw x) that man is annoying asf
Oh goodness THE HIDDEN BACKGROUND IN THE STOCK BATHROOM!! It took me so long to discover I genuinely started thinkinh y'all are talking about something else entirely but then I just started clicking on every part of the screen in the bathroom and ohhhhh
YOU FOUND ITTTT GOOD JOB POOKIE :3<3<3
ah im dead from laughter lmfao lane is so unserious. i love this game
I FINIHSED THE ONE ROUND OF PLAYTHRU N IM FNA DO ALL CHOICES NOW: GOD LIFE IS WORTH LIVING: I LITERALLY LOVE YOU FOR THIS!!! Im assuming we wont have as much lane (since he alr got lotsa screentime in sh2) in the next shift cuz of the different schedules.. ugh im going thru a lane withdrawal </3. this was so enjoyable. i love this. fav game
AAAAAAAAAA THANK UU POOKIE IM GLAD U ENJOYED IT!!! :3<3 dw youll have a ton of Lane in shift 3!! hes just so fun to write xDDD
GARAHHHH HOW DO I LEAVE THE HOUSE TTTTTTTT
EDIT: I FIGURED OUT: THERE WAS A BATHROOM AT THE EDGE
how do you get the scene where lane and bb handshakes?? or is that not out? ive been trying everything omg
hi cutie :3
to have that scene you have to have a date with Lane but DONT flirt with him, then ull end up in the neutral route during the beef and you have to choose "stop them both" :3!!
omg tysm im gonna try that out now!! >< i literally just got the alcohol route one just now and i love it HAHAH
Girliepop you are amazingg loved playing through the 2nd shift ( ˶˘ ³˘)♡
Have been waiting for it for a month and it was worth it, every character seemed so complex and detailed and I cant wait to find out more about them and also the mc's past in the future shifts
Love our little cutie patootie BB want him need him cant wait for more of him
and I really thought the weirdo had died(or killed) in the first shift since the news showed someone dying
***MILD SPOILERS AHEAD***
I had a few questions 🥺👉👈
1. how any shifts will be there in the full game??
2. are Amelia and Lane siblings???
3. does romancing Lane always lead to the bad ending or did i miss something??😔💔
i romanced BB and got him drive to drive me home 👁️🫦👁️💅
being neutral gave me the ending of going home by bus
and romancing lane just led me to the bad ending
about romancing Lane, you need to watch TV before going to bed in shift1 (so that you won't risk walking home in shift2).Or you can get dead drunk during Dare with Lane, and then Lane and BB will send you homeXDD
HELPPP how do you get drunk? I only ever get the choice to refuse his dare lmao
When in the coffee shop with Amelia, choose "something else" (whiskey), and reply to Lane's message in shift2 and go on a date with him, then you can unlock "Accept the dare" and drink your vodkaXD. After BB and Lane start arguing, you need to side with BB as much as possible (at least twice on BB's side), and you can get a drunk ending.
hope this is helpful to you<3
THANK YOU I LOVE YOUUU MUACK MUACK <3333
OHOH AND During your date with Lane, try to choose options that lean towards him or flirt with him as much as possible!!! Be close enough to Lane so that BB can show up with a sullen face; otherwise, you'll enter the branch line where the two shake hands.
hey kolen do u know something about a secret ending ? my tiny brain is totally fried lol
secret ending? you mean...the bad ending or something else?👀
youre a life saver Kolen, thank you girl :3 <3
my pleasure:3
omg thank youuuu so muchhh>3<
THANK YOUUU SWEETHEART!! :3 <3
here's the answer to ur questions:
1. i dont know yet but maybe 6 or 7? :3
2. yes, Amelia is Lane's older sister :3
3. NO! read the comments Kolen sent to you! :3 <3
LOV UUU
EXCUSUE ME AMELIAS IS LANES OLDER ISTER?????"!?!?
I'm SO obsessed with this game! I really thought I'd hate Lane at first, but he actually grew on me! I said "STFU" to my screen whenever he said stupid shit, but I can see that he's not that bad. He just needs to grow the fuck up lol. I managed to get onto his route without even knowing so I'll try out BB's route now. Can't wait for Shift 3!
EXACTLY BESTIE! that dude just needs to grow tf up x) maybe he will do better on shift 3? :3 enjoy BBs route!! :3
This game is a banger. I really felt scared...the story is getting interesting and the characters *chef's kiss*
THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCHHH SWEETIEEEE AAAA :3 <3