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LANE IS SO CUTE EHUEHEHEHE i love him im so exited for shift 2 !!

he is a cute little brat x) youll see hes kinda annoying in shift 2 xDDDD

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Heyyyyy sweetie :) , I've played lots of visual novels, but yours completely captivated me, from the plot to the characters. Your art is magnificent, and I couldn't help but show my support. Also, if needed, I'd be more than happy to help with the Italian translation. X <3

awww thank you pookie thats so sweet!! :3 <3<3 id be very happy for an italian translation!! :3

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The following content was translated using software, so there might be some awkward phrasing here and there >_<


Hello, do you have any plans for a Chinese translation? I really like this game. While playing on the computer, I've been using DeepSeek on my phone to assist with translation, manually typing each sentence to help me understand the story, but it's very slow.


(Just asking, hope this doesn’t pressure you!) This is a very interesting game—I really love the characters in it! (ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧ Wishing you smooth progress with your creative work in the end!" 


By the way, I'd like to ask what '<3' means because it's not commonly used in my country("Maybe it's also because I rarely use software.") (ヘ>_<ヘ). Also, where is the author from? (♡>𖥦<)♥

hello pookie thank you so much! :3 WHAT YOU REALLY TRANSLATED THE SENTENCES ONE BY ONE? O_o you have a LOT of patience! no worries the game will be translated in chinese by copiklaGrogu (theyve done the translation of shift 1 already) 

by the way "<3" is just a heart xDD i come from France and we use it a lot :3 <3 <3 sending love for you <3

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XD  <3<3<3

可以用pot的截图翻译,虽然识别不是很准但我是这么啃生肉的haha

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Hello, is there a Russian translation planned? I would really like to play, but I doubt my English skills. :"[

yes there will be one!! :3 its currently in the work by Alisa_p.a. :3 <3

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Is there ever going to be a chance for anypov? :3 ALSO I LOVE THE ARTSTYLE SMMM!!! I love how biker boy turns to the side whenever he gets embarrassed it's adorablex x33

AWWW THANK UU SWEETIE<3<3 yes there will be some anypov, they will be necessary to understand what happened! :3

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AHHH that's awesome!! :3 It sucks a little when you're stuck with specific pronouns TwT I can't wait for the update, I'm sure it'll be awesome >:D

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the MC will still be a woman (i think i didnt understand the question fully LMFAO...) but i meant you will be able to see the story as "someone else" xD i am sorry about the confusion... 

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Ahh, yeah I was asking if MC would be able to pick their gender TwT

im sorry.... *-*

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YALL HEAR (see) THAT?? SHIFT TWO EEEEYEYYEEKK (lil doodle of mr bb (IDK HOW TO DRAW HELMETS OK IM SORRY (╥_╥)
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LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOO I LOVE THISSSSSSSSSS xDDD THANK YOU SMMMM SWEETIE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THE HELMET MAKES ME LAUGH SM LMFAOO XDDD PLZZZZ i wanna put your drawing in shift 2 can you tell me your credit SWEETIEEEE <3<3<3

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UWAA OF COURSE YOU CAN ( ´ ꒳ ` ) you cn credit my by my itch.io tag or my tt which is just ziet.otx !!IM SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT AHAA I LOVE UR WORK SMM!! (´꒳`)♡

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NOTED POOKIE I WILL PUT BOTH :3<3 LOVE UUU

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Ahhhhh Android can't download I'm going crazy !!

SORRYYYY AAAAAAAA

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The new Game Page update is so cool! The cover art is especially awesome <3

awwww THANK YOU POOKIE :3<3

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He's so—— adorable!! I tried drawing an interaction (?) The vending machine scene was really cute! When I saw the update on the 26th, my excitement went through the roof!!! I can’t wait for the upcoming story—— I'll be patiently waiting for the update!!

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THIS IS AMAZINGGGGGG OMGGGG *O* HE IS SO BIG AND CUTE :3<3 thank you so much pookie thats beautiful!! i will put it in shift 2 if thats okay :33 i see there is your X acc thats perfect :3 i am so excited to release it!!! <3

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OMG Of course!!! This is such an honor Aaaaa (*´I`*)💖 I’ll follow you forever, LOVELOVELOVE!!!

LOVE UUUUUU :3<3<3

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im so excited to see how shift 2 turns out!!!!

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Amazing painting character illustration...amazing plot... I'm full of anticipation for the following story....Pls, I cant wait

thank you so much pookie!! i hope i wont disappoint!! :33<3

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so excited for shift 2!!

ME TOO AAAAAA CANT WAIT FOR YOU TO PLAYYY :33

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Damn this free? Lol i need that for Android 

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i will figure out how to build an android version xD! 

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THANK U SO MUCHHHHHH

 MUAK :3

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Can't wait to see our pookiessss <333

YESSSS!! :3

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会出在线版吗就是能在网页上玩的那种 有时候电脑不在身边 ꒦ິ^꒦ິ

i will try making one too! :3 

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被回复了!!~( ੭•͈ω•͈)੭๐♡.๐

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SHIFT 2 IM SO EXCITED <3333

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YIP YIP HURRA SHIFT 2 SOON WE WOOONN

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;-; no mobile?

i will try learning how to do it!! i see a lot of ppl want a mobile version!! ^^

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OK thanks ^_^

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pls make an android version

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I wanna play this game so bad

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i dont know how to do it i am so sorry pookie :(

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yyyyayyyy!!!

YIPEEEEE :3

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AHHAAA I CANT WAIT FOR SHIFT 2! (here again to show my love for your vn and you ofc) YOURE DOING AMAZING <3 AND DONT OVERWORK YOUR SELF!!!

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AWWWWWWWW THANK UUU POOKIE<3<3<3

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I just opened the game's official website as usual, hoping to discover some new information and thenWHAAAAAAT 26th JULY?!?!?!THANKYOU SPAROW I LOVE YOU🥺ITS TIME FOR DINNER GUYS!!!!!📢📢📢

(Is there a skull pattern tattooed on BB's hand?👀

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KOLENNNN I MISSED YOUUUU :3<3<3 i am WORKING SO HARDD AAAAAAAAAAAAA i promise once its finished i will answer you on tumblr!!! i am sorry xDDD LOVE YOUUUUUU :3 <3<3

(yes thats a skull x) )

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AwwwwwI miss you too🥺Don't worry about replying to me I'll wait😘Cheer for you💪🏻🔥🔥

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MWAAAHHHHH :3 <3

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Biker boy Novelle? AUGAHHHH HELL YES! Im a bit confused tho is shift two already out? Bc it says shift 1+2 and the game stopped after shift one o,,0

Anywayyyyy i love it so much i hope you will decide to not stop after the next shift and complete the game! First i wasn't sure if i would like the black and white but it makes everything so much cooler!

also i think it would be really cool if you could actually make the tasks like putting new Items in the shelf or cleaning the toilet (maybe someone watches us through the window? :D) or like getting acess to the security cams to maybe catch biker boy staring or just standin there? well only if its possible ofc if you dont like the idea thats fine! 

i cant wait to continue i mean yeah Lane? woah but biker boy? WHOAAAAAAA yall get me? also i would like to know how many endings you are planning to make if you already know that would make it a bit easier to know how many endings you can get

Anyway i love you for this bot MUWAHHHHHHHH i hope both of your pillow sides are cold in summer :-DDDD

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THANK YOUUUUUUU POOKIE :3 <3<3 NOOO SHIFT 2 ISNT OUT YET BUT SOON THIS MONTH DW XDDD

your ideas are so interesting!! in fact i wanted to put a security camera thingy BUTTT i decided to keep that idea for shift 3 xDDD but dw in shift 2 you will be able to clean stuff etc... also help customers :3 i have no idea how much endings i will do but in shift 2 there is ONE BAD ENDING! (good luck to have it xD) :3 MWAAAAAAAAAAH to you pookie love you i hope you will enjoy shift 2 :3  

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YAAAAA love ya pookie thank you for the respond cant wait for shift2 i can already tell you that i will love it you have my support!!! AHHH im so happy :3333 <3333

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I love this concept. Shy biker boy? So unique and subversive. Black and white world? So interesting. Cannot wait for the next shift to drop.

THANK YOU SO MUCH POOKIEEE :3<3<3

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hiii!! I m in love with your game and the art style is so gorgeous and has become my new obsession so I decided to make some fanart for you!:) I really hope you like it, it was a little rushed though. Anyway, I am SO excited for chapter 2!! Will be playing release day! Ps.. Don't mind that his hands look a little blue :)

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WOWWWW SO AMAZINGGGG POOKIEEEEEE *O* <3 HE IS SO CUTE WITH THE LIL BOTTLE OF WATER XDD THANK YOU SOOO MUCHHHH SWEETIIIE!!! <3 

PLEASE can you give me a @ so i can credit you for this? :3 (i wanna put your drawing at the end of shift 2 if thats okay :3) LOVE UUU BTW and shift 2 coming SOOONNN :333

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Thank you sm!! :)) i feel so cool now you replied to my comment… ANYWAY my @ is @j.j4lrs on twitter and instagram im pretty sure! and of course you can put it at the end of shift two :) IM SO EXCITED FOR SHIFT TWO! love u and your game <33

noted sweetie!! :3 I LOVE YOUUU<3

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If you see me being stalked by a tall and strong man full of tattoos, that is always wearing a helmet and is all shy around me don't save me, I'm exactly where I want to be. But jokes aside, the writting and the art was so fluid that the first shift started and ended and you are left with wanting to play more, especially when there's the subplot of the murders that are happening around the city. I'm excited for the next episodes.

Also, if you are open to translations (at the moment or in the future) I would love to translate it to Brazilian Portuguese :)

FIRST SENTENCE SO REALL!! xD thank you so much for your comment pookie :33 i am so happy you found the writing and art fluid!! i promise shift 2 will be even better :3333

i am totally open for translation btw!! thank you so muchh!!!<3

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I can't wait for shift 2! And I'm glad that you are open for translations, I'm going to leave my e-mail here, alongside my Carrd, because we are a small group that always is looking up to translate games to Brazilian Portuguese :3

E-mail: moonlight.delights.project@gmail.com

Carrd: https://moonlightdelightsproject.carrd.co/

awwww your group is very sweet!! <3 i leave my email here too just in case :3: 

sp4r00www@gmail.com

i am very almost done with shift 2's script!! <3

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Oh god havent checked for a while ,cant wait for tge second shift, ill propably try to voice over it while i play ^^, which means male y/n voice, god when i pkayed through the first shift i thought y/n was like neutral gender , but i read here she was actually a woman 0_0 and i laughed bc i voiced her as a male lol (if i try to voice it as female ill burst out laughing xD) cant wait for shift 2!!!

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YESSS I AM SORRY FOR THE CONFUSION POOKIEEE... i hope it didnt bother you or didnt make you uncomfortable, it really wasnt my intention!!! but bc of the themes of the game, the story etc.. its better if the MC is a woman :3 shift 2 is coming this month 100%, i hope youll like it ^^ (yes i took longer than planned so sorry... xD)

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like, i gave Y/N the name "Neb" (who is one of my male ocs), and i voiced her as male and will (bc i cant twist my male voice to sound like a voice of a woman ) and while i played the game with my friends i almost fell of my chair when the creepy guy from the store banged the table 0_0, i also was like wondering "is the dude gay or smth?" bc i thought that mc was gender neutral, dw the female mc didnt make me uncomfortable i just laughed at it. And when i found out that mc is female im like "now that makes more sense" good night, have a nice sleep, its 11:30 in here so idk just hope for it ^^

oooh i see!!! xD i am happy it made you laugh then!! :33<3 i hope you had a nice sleep pookie!! ^^

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OMG I legittt can’t waaaaittt for The Second Shift to dropppp like brooo I’m losing my mind out here 😭😭😭 I’m so hypeddd it’s insaneeee!!! LOVE UUU smmm and I’ll be right here waitinnn like a loyal lil gremlin 😩💖 LET’S GOOOOO 🔥🔥🔥

AWWWWWW THANK YOU SO MUCHHHH POOKIE<3<3 I PUT MY SOUL IN SHIFT2 I HOPE YOULL LIKE ITTTTT<3<3 xD

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I CAN'T EXPRESS HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS; IT'S ACTUALLY SO GOOD SO FAR

AAAAAAAAHHHHHH THANK YOU SO MUCHHHH MY CRISPY POOKIEBEAR<3

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hiii, I just wanted to say I literally love this game so much.. and I made fanart of biker boy!!! I ain't much of a drawer so the way I was staring at the reference the entire time xD (references from Pinterest btw) but I hope you like it!!! 🫶 

Actually my first time making fanart for anything lol

 

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if i like it? I LITERALLY LOVE ITTTTTT SO MUCHHH!!! <3 THANK YOUUUUUU POOKIEEEE!! how the hell you are not much of a drawer? you draw SO WELL!!!<3 he looks so sexy like that xD i am very flattered you decided to draw BB for your first fanart ever!!!!<3 (like really my heart stopped when i read that xD) i wanna put it at the end of the shift2, can you give me the @ you want me to put? :3333 

thank you again sweetie <3

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AHHHHHH thank you so much!!!! My @ is 6orkle9 and omg thank you so much for creating such a delicious character !!! Literally love you girl!!! 🫶

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noted :3 LOVE YOU TOOOO SWEETIE<3 :33

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A friend of mine recommended me this game because he knows how much I love a good stalker trope and bikes. It's safe to say I fell in love with the story! It has a lot of potential and made me grab my iPad and start drawing away. It's just a sketch, but I'm having a hard time finishing it. Either way, I hope you like it as much as I like your game. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for episode two! ♡

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OHHH MY GOOOOODDDDD!!!!! THIS IS A MASTERPIECE!! <3 thank you SO MUCH pookie i am on the verge of crying rn xDDD it warms my heart so much seeing this and motivate me even more!! :3 please take your time to finish it ok? :3 do you allow me to put it at the end of shift 2 so everyone can see it? if yes please give me all the credits you want me to put!! :3<3 thank you again SO MUCHHHHHHDKDKDK :3

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You are so incredibly sweet!! Thank you so much, I wasn't expecting your reply ^^ Not gonna lie, your message motivated me enough to finish the drawing today. I'm still learning and colors are my worst enemy haha but I hope I did your characters justice. And it would be my honor for you to put my drawing at the end of shift 2. I have my twitter! @iartemiisa Thank you so much truly and I hope you like the finish drawing ♡

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WOWWWWW!!! *O* THIS IS AMAZINGGGG!! THE COLORS EVERYTHING!! YOU EVEN PUT THE LITTLE BACKGROUND THATS SO CUTEEEE XD i am so happy my message motivated you :3 i will credit you dont worry pookie and thank you so much for that masterpiece!!<3<3 (you also motivated me to finish some backgrounds xD<3)

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LANE IS THE BEST. I hated him at first, but bro he was so nice when he saved us and lowkey I don't like biker guy so... LANE. I hope there's a good ending with Lane.

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YES HE IS THE BEST!!<3<3 ngl when i saw "i dont like biker guy" i smiled like a psycho xDDD

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holy shit this game is amazing!!! I look forward to more of updates <333333

AWWW THANK YOU SWEETIEEEE!!!!<3<3 LOVE UUU

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love this game, so much fun :> biker boy my love, my insta feed is manifesting before me LOL :) (i shouldnt have liked all those tiktoks LOL) 
interesting tho too! love the dynamic already between biker boy + Lane, keeping me on my toes 
can't wait for shift 2 ! 
-stealth

thank you so so much for your comment!!<3<3<3 i was sick these days but now im working hard on shift 2! <3<3

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!!Can I hug the motorcyclist!!

I have so many questions again :3

1. Does the motorcycle guy really love ramen if he rejected all the other options?

2. If we choose Lane's route, we get a bit more information about our abusive client. So, did the motorcyclist see everything? Does that mean he's always watching us outside the store, or does he have another method?

3. Had Lane seen the motorcycle guy before?

4. Does the motorcycle guy live in our same building or nearby?

5. If the motorcycle guy says we’re the only thing worth it, then what—according to him—is not worth it? I can't imagine what he must have gone through to think that, or what we did to make him feel that way.

6. You mentioned that the motorcycle guy sleeps on the roof—isn’t that really dangerous??

7. What does the motorcycle guy do for a living? Is he rich?? (I'd love him even if he didn’t have a cent ❤️)

8. Does the motorcyclist work out regularly? (I JUST WANT TO BURY MY FACE IN HIS CHEST) 🫦

He was so sweet to leave us a bottle of water! He’s so sweet I just want to kiss him all over! <3<3<3

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omg sooo goooood questions:3 I want to know too

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thank you for your questions again pookie!! <3 

i finally decided to share my tumblr since some people asked for it, you can find it here and on my profile! <3<3

1. no, he doesn't care much for ramen xD he only accepted it because it matched the refund price exactly and didn't want you to get in trouble <3

2. yes and no, he didn't witness everything in Lane's route because the weirdo was less aggressive than in his own route. the situation was wrong, but not dangerous enough. the truth is, he's often nearby, close enough to protect you but distant enough not to interfere unless absolutely necessary (keep in mind that he can't be there all the time tho) ^^

3. probably. Lane might've passed him on the street or noticed the bike, but never though much of it. ironically, Biker Boy probably remembers Lane very well xD

4. no, he doesn't live there, i am not even sure he has somewhere to sleep

5. everything else <3 theres something about you that gets to him, but you will discover that later ^^ 

6. yes but it doesnt matter to him, even the discomfort ^^ besides, he doesnt really sleep, he just rests with his eyes shut

7. he probably had a job before, but not anymore. and no hes not rich xD but he gets what he needs anyway. how ? lets just say... he asks in a way people dont refuse x)

8. yes he works out!! <3 (mostly during the day, when hes bored) 


LOVE <3<3<3<3<3

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Loved this game! Could you share your tumblr account, if you have one? 

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THANK YOUUUU SWEETIE<3<3 here my tumblr ^^ <3

Thanks ! 🩷

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omg I love this game already!! From the very beginning I felt the tension and I want to see a continuation. Good luck in creating and strength to you!!<3 

THANK YOU SO MUCHHH POOKIE<3<3<3<3<3<3

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