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Guys pllls help how do i download the full game ;((( i dont want the demo

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It is not out yet. It is still in development.

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Def one of my fave novels, me and my besties were obsessed w Lane 😭😭🙏🏻. BB is lowkey adorable too.
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AWWWWWWWW THANK U CUTIESSS so glad u liked my angelboy Lane <3<3

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i came across this randomly and i'm so fucking glad i did, LITERALLY ALL OF THE SCARY OR TENSE SCENES MADE ME UNCOMFORTABLE and the way that both of the love interests are the furthest from perfect is just so nice, it really helps flesh them out as more 'real'. ( Your writing is amazing )
I am team Lane tho, his dumbass is less likely to maul me if things don't go his way.

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THANK UUUUUUUUU SWEETIE!! <3<3 u can also slap Lane whenever u want

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Red helmet..? Am I smelling a new character?

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maybe pookie.......................

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I went up to the window and the shit said "kill yourself", that was funny as hell and I didn't see that coming at all lmao. Anyways, dope ass game. Would be 10 times better if Amelia was a love interest, she's bad 🙏

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SHE IS a love interest, my dear :3 <3

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Android when!?!?

working on it captain x)

OMFG HELL YEAH THANK YOUUUUU(⁠*⁠˘⁠︶⁠˘⁠*⁠)⁠.⁠。⁠*⁠♡💕

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how tall is lane ?

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Lane is 181cm pookie :3 <3

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La verdad la historia es bastante interesante. Me encanta cómo cada personaje, incluido el de nosotros tiene cosas complejas. Por ejemplo, el como nuestro personaje no le ve color a la vida, y también su perspectiva o manera de pensar de las cosas, es bastante único. El juego parece que no solo te invita a descubrir más de los personajes a tu alrededor (Lane, BB, Amalia) sino también acerca de ti mismo, de tu pasado, de tu rutina, del por qué pareces estar tan deprimido. Realmente me encantó todo el concepto y la construcción de personajes. Al final, solo me queda decir que amo a Biker Boy, es de los pocos personajes tipo stalker con los que logro empatizar. Con respecto a Lane... desde el principio tenía una mala expectativa acerca de él. A lo largo del juego mi perspectiva sobre él se ponía peor, varios de los comentarios que le hizo a la protagonista me incomodaron ya que a veces recibo comentarios así en la vida real, lo que hizo que odiara a su personaje aún más, sin embargo, eso significa que está bien escrito ya que logra su propósito. Y con Amalia, aún no sé bien qué opinar de ella, pero estoy seguro de que quiero ver más sobre su historia con nuestro personaje.

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THANK YOU SO MUCH!! :3 <3 your comment really warmed my heart <3 i hope your opinion on Lane will change in Shift 3 tho with everything i planned for him! :3 

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will amelia be a love interest?

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yes

there's more info on her progress page btw

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good answer (im talking about the gif)

LMAO THANK U

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hi pls can i ask u. how i download the full game:((( i dont know how i keep geting the demo

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only shift 1 and 2 are available pookie, the game will be updated in "shift" so the game isnt finished yet :3 if you meant the shift 2, you just have to skip the dialogues and shift 2 will start at the end of shift 1 <3

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RAAAAHHH ABSOLUTELY AMAZING, I PLAYED A WHILE BACK WHILE THERE WAS ONLY SHIFT 1 AND I PLAYED AGAIN AFTER SEEING SHIFT 2 CAME OUT! YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB !! IM SO EXCITED FOR MORE AND THE GAME MECHANICS AND STORY IS SO GOOD !!! I CANT WAIT !!

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I AM WORKING HARDDDDD DW CAPTAIN <3

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YIPEEEEE YOU ARE DOING AMAZING!!!

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Wow, this is absolutely incredibleAAAAAA!!! I rushed to play it the second the localization was out. The amount of text is massive—it's like a whole novel! The exploration mode is so fun too, and it feels like there are so many hidden mysteries. I really want to find out why the protagonist s world is black and white and what happened in the past awwww! The character writing is also amazing-I love it so much! Super excited for Chapter 3!!😭❤️

AAAAAAA THANK YOUUU SO MUCH MY DEAR :3 <3<3 so so glad you liked it!! :3

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this game is so fucking amazing ill go insane waiting for new chapters I hope we really learn more about bb and maaayyybe see his face 

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YOULL LEARN A LOOOT MORE ABOUT HIM DW POOKIE! <3

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I think it's one of the few games I've replayed to know all the endings and different dialogues, this is the second comment I've left here but I really love the game, I like that no character is really made to make you fall in love with them since they all have their red flags. BTW The characters remind me a lot of the Bad Boys Reply by Inner Circle song. This game urgently needs a playlist. 😭

THANK YOU SO MUCHH MY DEAR <3 YESSS I AGREE FOR THE PLAYLIST! some lovely ppl have made some on my tumblr!! :3

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Here in the comments someone wrote that there is an ending where the main character dies, how to get it?

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Don't ask the customer about the disappearances, pick Lane's route, don't watch TV and in shift 2 keep going along with Lane's route

I still couldn't get it. Is there a guide for it?

i didnt get it either.

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Did I get blackout drunk on convenience store vodka? Maybe. Did I get to enjoy two guys fussing over me? YES.

I may have missed out on the two of them trying to break each others' hands, but hey... worth it.

10/10. Will play again.

LMFAOOOOO glad u liked it pookie ;3 <3

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Help please, how to get on this??😭

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You need to get on the neutral route(go on a date with Lane but don't flirt), and then during their argument choose "stop them both"

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I NEED MORE THIS IS AMAZING

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Love this! Biker boy is the best! Can't wait for more! 

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I LOVE how each character is vastly different. Other romance VN lack variety and Ctrl-C each love interest with a few different characteristics, but the same personality. I enjoyed the twists that made each character unique and sorta a red flag in their own ways. BB isn't perfect; the dude dropped out of school and can't write. It balanced him out, so not the #1 choice every time someone plays the game. It also takes some time to see the significant red flags in Lane, making him a more charismatic character in the beginning. 

What I thoroughly enjoyed was a more realistic display of everyday life. I'm tired of seeing main characters always being well-off and never struggling with mental health, time, or money. Not to mention the lack of ACTUAL comedy. This novel was funny as hell and wasn't forceful with the humor. Also, it's refreshing to see an MC that thinks like a normal human and isn't immediately playing alongside the plot. Thank you... Keep up your amazing work.

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OMGG THANK YOU SMMM SWEETIE!! <3

so so happy you liked it, i did my best to make it as realistic as possible and will still work hard for Shift 3 :3

YAY I CAN'T WAIT!! >:3

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i think the biker boy and the orange helmet guy are the same person

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Literally the whole argument scene 

(Sorry i had to make this)

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real, i love the fact Lane is the one with the knife xD

That's Alcohol dear (I think)

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i just finished playing this game on itch and oh my gosh i am completely obsessed. i spent hours trying to get every single ending and reading every little line from every character. it was such a fun experience and i loved every moment. even the little details like cleaning up or getting ready for work were so funnn

the art style really stood out to me. i loved the black and white theme so much and when things got intense those flashes of red were so cool and dramatic. it made everything feel so much more alive and exciting.

the characters though… wow. the two male leads are so different and i love them both for completely different reasons. biker boy has my whole heart. even though it’s clear he has a dark past and some scary moments he is such a gentleman with the main character. he really treats her like a person and even when he got tense in one route he apologized right after which melted me. he’s gentle but you can tell he’s dangerous in that protective way and i adore that energy.

then there’s lane. he is such a walking red flag but in a fascinating way. he’s sexist and flirty and sometimes says the worst things but you can tell there’s something more to him. little moments like when he stopped the mc from drinking too much made me feel like he really does care but just hides it behind a front. i honestly think he’s redeemable and i love how complicated he is.

the main character herself is so sweet but also has moments where she stands up for herself and i loved seeing that. i also really appreciated how the game showed some of the real struggles women face like dealing with creeps or unwanted attention. it felt realistic but not overwhelming and added depth to the story.

overall this game was amazing. the atmosphere was perfect a little dreary but still exciting and there were even a few jump scares that got me good. biker boy is definitely my favorite but lane with his sharp attitude is unforgettable too. i can’t wait to see more from this creator and to support in any way possible

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THANK YOU SO MUCHH MY DEAR <3

really appreciate your comment and i am so happy you like the characters! i shall work hard on Shift 3! :3

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it honestly feels completely unbalanced how much better biker boy is compared to lane. lane is basically the definition of an average “real guy” and not in a good way. he’s the type who spits out sexist one liners, hides behind forced humor just to cover up how deeply insecure he actually is, and then piles more issues on top like he’s the only person in the world with trauma. and of course, instead of growing from it, he acts like a jerk and convinces himself that somehow that’s gonna change anything. spoiler: it doesn’t

the immaturity is off the charts. he gets caught up in these embarrassingly petty problems like “oh no, the girl I liked chose someone else, my life is ruined” please. that’s literally the kind of thing every teenager goes through and eventually grows past. but lane? he wallows in it and acts like it’s the end of the world, as if throwing tantrums and being toxic somehow makes him deep or relatable

now compare that to biker boy. sure, he’s got insecurities too  who doesn’t? but he doesn’t use them as an excuse to be awful. He comes across as honest, grounded, and mature. he actually acts like an adult, takes responsibility, and, most importantly, he defends you instead of tearing you down. he has flaws, but at least he handles them like someone who’s grown past the high-school drama phase

so yeah, it’s not even close. the difference between them is so one-sided it almost feels unfair. i honestly hope lane improves at some point, because right now he’s stuck in this cliché of immaturity and fragile ego. but he’s just not my type. maybe some teenager would look at him and think he’s “relatable” but from my perspective, he’s just exhausting

of course, biker boy comes with his own set of red flags: things like stalking and other pretty obvious signs that he’s not exactly what you’d call a “normal” or stable person. that’s where lane clearly looks safer by comparison. lane doesn’t cross into that extreme territory... he may be immature frustrating and stuck in his own clichés but he’s not out there showing outright dangerous behavior. from a purely logical perspective, lane would be considered the safer, more reasonable choice

but here’s the catch: we’re talking about a fictional game that’s clearly designed to appeal to people who enjoy the messy, chaotic, morally questionable side of romance and psychology. within that context, the whole idea of “who’s safer” kind of loses its weight. morality doesn’t hold the same value in a story that’s intentionally written for people who want intensity instability and even toxicity as part of the experience

so yeah, lane may technically be the safer option in the real world but in the context of this fictional narrative that doesn’t really matter safety isn’t the point here and that’s exactly why biker boy feels so much more compelling even with all his obvious red flags  

at the end of the day lane just feels like every other “real guy” out there insecure immature hiding behind sexist jokes and fake humor acting like a teenage heartbreak makes him deep he might be the safer option sure but he’s also painfully predictable biker boy is messy unstable full of red flags but at least he’s not boring he feels alive honest and complex in ways lane just doesn’t and that’s exactly why in fiction people don’t really care about the safe choice they want the chaos and the intensity and that’s why biker boy will always stand out

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its more than just a teenage heartbreak, dw xD but i totally understand your POV, tbh i wanted people hating on Lane for that Shift 2 but it seems like i failed xD i am still happy you think hes just an immature, loud, brat tho so i can try changing ur POV in Shift 3 x) 

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haha i hope i change my mind :D i think i was a bit too harsh on him lol but i’m excited to learn more about him, he really doesn’t seem like a bad guy (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ) and yesss i need more of the puppy biker boy too!!

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I loved this game so much <3, can't wait for updates! Also, I have a love-hate relationship with Lane. While I was playing I also tried to understand him: he really avoid being vulnerable, but he is. Being loud is one method to avoid it. I want to know more about his story, but...some about his lines already tell something about one person we saw. I'm curious about them.

thank you so much pookie<3

youll know more about him, promise <3

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THIS GAME IS SO FUCKING GOOD PLEASE DONT QUIT HALFWAY THROUGH </333 DO YOU HAVE A KOFI OR ANYTHING TO SUPPORT? I MUST GO SPREAD THE WORD ABOUT THIS MASTERPIECE 

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I FUCKING LOVE YOUR ENERGY

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FRFR

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THANK UUU BESTIEE BUT I DONT HAVE KOFI AND I DONT THINK I WILL MAKE ONE XD you saying that already means A LOT! <3<3

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if we don't get to kiss one of them (even a little smoochie on biker boys helmet or smth) i will be very very sad 

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no worries about it muehehehehe...

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I love Lane and his dynamic with mc so much. The dialogues with him seem so real and close to real life, not just a typical 2d man. I feel like he’s that type of character that “barks” loud but has a soft and sweet soul. The scene of their “date” was so cute, the way you can see that it’s just his defense reaction due to trauma and etc (but I’d like to see more explanations of his nature, not just high-school breakup, like family patterns or anything else), though the smallest acts of kindness makes him react so sincere and innocent you can feel the warmth bc of their relationships. All that, even though I’ve downloaded the game for the bb lol. Also wanted to ask when do you plan on realising the 3rd chapter? And thanks for that great amount of decisions u can make and long chapters xx

THANK U SMMM POOKIE <3

dont worry, youll get a lot more explanations of Lane's nature! :3 i will try finishing shift 3 before the end of the year, but no promises xD!

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I WATCHED A GAME PLAY OF SHIFT ONE AND TWO CAN I DOWNLOAD IT ON AN ANDROID PHONE??????

IM TRYING TO CREATE AN ANDROID VERSION BUT ITS PRETTY HARD XDDD

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So... I've only played one time, so i haven't fully discovered other routes but damn I hate Lane and I'll probably never like him. I know, i know it was warned that it's gonna be sexist but damn I hated his words. 

I'm basically Amelia in real life with how I view men, man hater and a reluctant straight woman so this is very opinionated view. Amelia is just the hotter version of me lol

I like BB, Biker Boy really gives off that creepy authority vibes that doesn't force you (at least in my play through) but make you want to follow it yourself, and honestly I'm into it. Irl I'll run tho. But seriously Lane is a no no for me.

I'm gonna be a moth flying through that hot flaming black helmet I swear. Also I really like how realistic and well written the character, they don't feel one dimensional. Love it <3

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thank you so much pookie! <3

tbh i am also like Amelia irl with men xD and sometimes i got mad at myself for writing some of Lane’s dialogue XD but ill try making you appreciate this sexist idiot in Shift 3 x)

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I just finished playing this, and it's so amazing. It definitely left its imprint on me. All the small details, the atmosphere, the fact that everything is b&w; this is like a psychological thriller. I loved it!!!

thank you SO MUCHHH my dear<3<3 i will make sure Shift 3 is just as immersive :3

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OKAYY!! Quick question, though, do I have to download shift 3? Or will it already be in the game that I installed a while ago?

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The game is so AMAZING. I saw an edit on tiktok and i decided to play this game and i dont even regret it. The moment I saw Lane, my jaw DROPPED. ik he can be an idiot but tbh i dont fw bikers, i dont hate bb but hes really not my type. Ill always forever be a Lane girl. Im already excited for shift 3!!! I love you for making this game btw

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AWWW THANK U SMMM POOKIE I LOVE UU <3<3

youll have SO MUCH Lane content for Shift 3 CANT WAIT :3<3<3

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is bbs name werner

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yes (no) (yes)

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LOL

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So glad that I finally got around to playing this because I am INVESTED! First of all i LOVE the aesthetic! Black and white with splashes of red for important things is one of my favorite color schemes and it gives the whole game a gloomy yet kind of horror movie feel! I usually don't like when games are really silent or music-less but here the slight music or the times when it's just rain, or the complete silence is just as much a part of the story as the art so I left the music as is in my video. The whole vibe is chefs kiss!
And Biker Boy is PRECIOUS, I love him already and Lane is a butt, i kinda hate him, and what i LOVE the most is that now that I've played Shift two and really explored them both I'm starting to see their facades dropping and my opinion of both shifting! I was already shocked by Amelia in shift 2!
I adore a good mystery and already feel like I'm seeing clues, hope to WZ later♫
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OMGG ESPOIR??? :O

thank you SO MUCHH for playing my game omgg <3<3 i am so glad you liked it (but also glad u hated Lane xD (he deserves it)) i cant wait to share Shift 3 with you! :3 i promise i wont disappoint and i will make you appreciate Lane more ^^ <3

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It took me a while but I'm so glad I finally played it! Take your time, a great story is never rushed!

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Ts the best vn fr

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Excuse me, but in the one of endings where the main character died, did that man 🍇 her?😭 My poor girl omg 

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frrr someone save my girl 

HOWD U GET THAT ENDING?? and the one where u ride with bb </3

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PLS can we kiss Amelia?

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french kiss.

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Such a cool game i played the first shift and really enjoyed it, however It doesn't say anywhere how many shifts creator plans on making? I really don't want to play shift two only to have to wait to update.

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i plan on making 6 or 7 x) theyll all be very long xD

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looking forward to the final product!

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I love this game but how can I download the second shift?

hi pookie :3 the second shift starts right after the first one ends, just download the file once! <3

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I've been spending the past 2 days grinding this game haha. It's just that good!! I've gotten the black-out drunk ending, broken nose, and BB at the door endings, but I have a feeling there's more for me to discover lol. I love the simple navigation system as well as the simple colour choices! It really adds to the spookiness of the game as well as the importance of the colour red. The art in this game is also delliciousss 👅👅👅 


Personally, I'm a Lane girlie (don't come at me pls ik he's such a jerk) because he's normal lol. At least more normal than BB (I've got a zero tolerance for stalkers). Sure, he runs his mouth, but he's as the old man describes, "all bark no bite". Lane also makes me laugh haha. Not to mention, BB just rubbed me the wrong way when MC said she was scared and he just replies with "be scared"... yikes! 

Can't wait for shift 3!! 

Keep up the good work 👅  

Me when Lane appeared on screen:


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AWWWWWWWWWWW THANK U SMM BESTIE <3

i love Lane too tbh, and i am sure youll like him even more in shift 3 :3 <3<3

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