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Hi Spar0w!! I’m reeling rn because Shift Two was amazing! I woke up and saw the update and immediately flew out of bed to play it!

The characters, writing, art, everything!! And even the new point and click games! You’ve absolutely outdone yourself OMG!

I loved how much you expanded the worldbuilding and even added the incredible point and click games! Your approach to writing and lore is so thoroughly amazing and I can’t wait to find out more about the story!

Spoilers hidden!

The art was incredible and I was so so happy at all the Lane closeups and interactions that we got :c!! I love that man so much even if he does say some awful things at times! But I’m so weak to dark haired tired looking men and I am really intrigued by what he’s hiding and what’s hurt him so badly in his past.

With Biker Boy, I LOVED how you expanded on his more obsessive nature and showed more of what he was capable of. Some of his scenes, including his confrontation with Lane, him entering your building and the little flips in his attitude towards you had me so on edge, it was incredible to experience!

Amelia was wonderful too! It made me so sad to see the contrast between our friendship before and what it was now. Hoping we get to talk to her more soon and figure things out. Also the little facts she mentioned about Lane made me really intrigued too!

Thank you so much for making something so wonderful and for sharing your wonderful creation with us! I can’t wait to support you for your future updates but until then I hope you take a well deserved break for your hard work! I uploaded my new playthrough to my YouTube here and also shared it on TikTok a while back here too! My community loves your game, thank you for such a great experience! Time to work on some fanart!!

THANK YOU SOOOO SOOO MUCHHHH YINNY!!!! :3 <3 i watched the WHOLE thing while resting on my couch and THAT WAS SOOOO FUNNY XDDDD i love you fangirling over Lane even tho he says dirty/not good things xD!!! 

there will be more jump in the past in shift 3, also NSFW scenes and more lore!! :3 i hope i wont disappoint :3! <3 <3

Youre welcome, lovely!!!! I’m so happy, I’m such a Lane fan and there was so much of him here. I am in awe of his ability to make me smile then immediately frown in the same sentence LOL.

I’m so excited! You’ll never disappoint me! I will be here supporting you and being patient! And if you ever need any coverage or promo help please feel free to reach out!

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youre an angel Yinny!! :3 <3 thank you so much for your support!! <3

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SHIFT TWO LET'S GO IT WAS SO FREAKING COOL AND SURPRISINGLY LONG LIKE HELLO???

Man this is literally like my dream game omg.........the fact that this is free is baffling 

BB is so freaking silly I just get cuteness aggression every time he comes on screen- I want to punch him cuz he's so cute...Lane on the other hand? I want to punch him straight in the face but not in the same way as BB he is my ARCH nemesis, mark my words

(all jokes aside even tho I don't like Lane I have to admit he's written exceptionally well, I love his character and the way he is so complicated it's like he's really just a dude, with raw, awful parts of himself on full display, I love that)

AAAAAAAAAA THANKKKK YOUU SO MUCH POOKIE :3 <3 i am happy to see you still dont like Lane but you like his character xD writing his lines was honesty the funniest thing to do xD <3 i cant wait to start writing shift 3 :3

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hello ahh im currently playing rn but im stuck at the store part... am i stupid... i cant find the staff room aaaa im so sorry!!

youre not stupid pookie!! theres only a staff door, and its outside the store :3 go outside, then in the alley, and then click at the bottom of the screen to find the imagebutton!! :3

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thank you so much!! im enjoying the game so far. thankyouthankyouthankyouuu (i dislike lane but i cant help but also just wish he just steps up and be better for mc) 

but i loveloveloveloveloveeee bikerboy he is so my type!! i love an obedient, doberman vibes kind of guy. plus he is so quiet too (thats attractive for a man, he knows his place thats hot as hell.)


ill be sure to comment again once i finished the shift 2 hehe ^^

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The second shift is even better than I expected! I’ve been playing all day and still haven’t seen all the options, awesome work! Keep it up, after a well earned break, of course, you deserve it! <333

Also, I noticed a small typo, when BB gives the red helmet to the MC, Biker Boy says, “It’s... kind of borken.” Probably should be "broken". Don't worry, no bugs so far :)

NOOOOOO IVE MADE A MISTAKE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA XD jk i am glad theres no bugs! thank you for telling me sweetie and thank you so muchhhhhh!! :3<3

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I am loving the toxic vibes of a situationship with these dogs <3

Something to note in shift 2: when I'm done talking to Scarlette, there's no option to back out of the scene into the alley, the cursor didn't seem to pick up anything when I tried hovering all over

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hi pookie :3 <3 im glad you like my doggos!!! xD for the scarlette scene i went into the game again just to check, and if everything is okay, you actually can!! here a screenshot:

(maybe the imagebutton was a bit too small idk xDDD)


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Ah, found it! I was so focused on hovering over the bike I didn't think to check that side XD

no problem pookie :3

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I LOVE LOVE LOVE the second shift so much like that hand-shaking scene is funny af. Lane is an absolute asshole most of the time but somehow I cannot hate him (i triedd but i can't, ok?, sue me he's hella fine asshole and i do love him when he is not an asshole) and our pookie biker boi (he is so adorable i just wanna keep him in my pocket, maybe a bit scared sometimes but we will work smth out). I freaking love MC vibe too <3 (girlie has my whole heart) Can't wait for more updates. Thank you so much for your hard work, luv ya. <333 

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THANK YOU GORGEOUS!! :3 i knew a LOT of ppl disliked and even hated Lane for being an asshole, and now people likes him even tho he is still one, this is SOOOO FUNNY HAHAHA XD

(im putting you in my pocket lov uuuuu :3)

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The old man warning us about quiet dogs, but if BB dangerous then why so cute?

Lane is also really adorable in his asshole-ish way, the second shift made me like him a LOT more- I'm struggling, I love them both 😭





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MC absolutely has witnessed something she shouldn't have with BB and now is repressing those memories... Keep those memories locked up tight, MC, for your romance with BB! 

Also realizing Amelia is Lane's sister made me go "Ohh!" with the casual hints that had been dropped.

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AAAAAAAA i really LOVED writing Lanes dialogues more than BBs honestly so knowing you appreciated him more really made me feel happy :3 that guys a brat thats why i love him xD






(putting hints about Lane "copying" Amelia was so much fun to do too xD)

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Mann this game really made me stay up all night just to figure out the different endings in shift 2 LOL, heh anywayysss i had a fun time playinnn i want more people to know abt this game

AWWWWW THANK YOU SO MUCHHH<3 i hope you had fun sweetie :3!!

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How do you get to the endings for shift 2 after you click around the store? I can't tell if I'm having difficulty with a glitch, or if I missed something. I swear I've clicked everything... but I'm kinda dumb tbh.

dont say youre dumb pookie!! :3 i just answered you in your other comment :3 <3

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l'm already OBSESSED with this game and ofcurse with BB! really good game and the art is captivating I love it. I'm so excited about how shift 3 will be. I'll be waiting even if it takes long the progress and the waiting is worth it. <3

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THANK YOU SO SO SO SOOO MUCHH!! it means a LOT!! <3

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Not me being on holiday and yoinking my sister's PC so I can play shift 2 haha. I loved it so much! It's very interesting and so captivating. The small details, the cliffhanger, everything! I truly hope you get more credit and that your audience keeps growing and growing. Also, the color red scares her and yet, she doesn't mind having a red helmet when she's with him?? UGH PLEASE MORE MORE MORE!!!! 

I did both Lane and BB and let's just say.... BB for the win. Even tho Lane can have his charm and is funny sometimes, BB will always have my heart.

Very proud of you and how far you've become, I'll be here every step of the way <3 Also I screamed when I saw my fanart at the end hehe. Thank you for that, made my day ^^ 


(can we be friends pls i love dark romance and biker boys as well and i can speak french ;_;)

AAAAAAAAA POOKIEEEBEARRR <3 thank you so much for your comment, i am happy you enjoyed shift 2 :3 MC said it was red like dried cherries so i guess its okay as long as its not red blood? or maybe MC is dumb O_o (LMFAO IM KIDDING) 

awwwww you are so sweet!! :3 you just made my day by posting this comment! :3 

(????? OF COURSE WE CAN BE FRIENDS SWEETIEEEEEE <3 :3) 

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I think this might be a bug. When the mouse pointer hovers over the sanitary compartment in this scene, it doesn't turn red. It's so concealed that I spent half an hour searching for it
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hello pookie :3 its not a bug, just a little secret i put for curious players x) there are also some other invisible imagebuttons! :3

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can i know how many invisible imagebuttons there is in the game? gotta make sure i explored all of it

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i think there are 8! (some of them are really here just for fun, one will be useful in shift 3 if you go check it again x) )

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Wow 8..how unexpected, guess its time to rerun the whole plot and examine the whole navigation areas xD

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I really need this on android 😭

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i will try creating one!! x)

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I posted the gameplay.

I somehow ended up in.. neither route (?)

Uhh... I kinda gave both of them mixed signals, ahem.

I leaned towards biker boy now... (that staring contest was intense, since I was in neither side 😂).

Oh, I tried many variations (both routes) but I like the uncertainty (I want to be loyal to biker boy tho, but let's see~)

Curious how shift 3 will be~

I enjoyed your writing~ 💕

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THANK YOU SO MUCHHH FOR THE VIDEO SWEETIEEEE :3 <3 i am so HAPPY you liked it :3 i will watch it for sure while drawing!!! LOVE YOU <3

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That was amazing!!! It was definitely worth the wait thanks for uploading shift 2 to itch despite itch having new policies when it comes to nsfw stuff of visual novels I ended shift 2 with finishing all off my tasks and with BB aka Biker Boy offering me a ride back home and I agreed, hope this question ain't to spoilery on what shift are we going to find about his real name? He's so goddamn cute i also like the extra photos sketches and designs you added  (is there also gonna be a sketch of a body chart of all of BB's tattoo's hehehe)  at the end of shift 2 keep it up dear creator

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how do you get to the endings after you click around the store? I can't tell if I'm having difficulty with a glitch, or if I missed something

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hello pookie :3 to continue the story in the store you have to complete at least 2 tasks (take the cleaning supplies in the stockroom and clean aisle 2 and the washrooms for example) and then go see the staff door, then go to aisle 3 and you can continue :3

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THANK YOU IM HAPPY YOU LIKED IT POOKIE :3 (yes itchio sucks these days...) about BB's name... i think youll learn his name soon, but then youll forget it ;) 

AND YES ABSOLUTELY!! once im fully rested i will draw him and all his tattoos !! :3 <3

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I recently played shift2 it was amazing!!! such a underrated visual novel I barely see anyone talk about this!

THANK UUU POOKIEEEE <3

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Came for Biker Boy, Stayed for Lane. NO CAUSE LIKE I love him (˵ ¬ᴗ¬˵). Great work there, I only played like "Lane´s route" for both shifts once rn but that standoff between the two of them HAD ME ON EDGE. I love the worldbuilding btw, like I wonder if Mike is someone important (≖⩊≖) (And yes I also have discovered BB´s little "messages" in the alley) Love Lane, Love Amelia, Biker Boy scares me LMAO- BUT I WILL DEF FOLLOW YOUR PROGRESS. And no I LOVED the typing sounds, BB´s was so fitting, I had chills. AMAZING JOB, LOVE YOUUU <3

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THANK YOU SOOOOOO SOOOO MUCHHHH SWEETIE IM GLAD YOU LIKED IT!!! :3 i put like A LOT of hints in the world building that will be useful for later so i am happy you spotted some of them!! :3 thank you so much!!! LOVE YOUUUU <3

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hey kitten ,i have finished the shift 1,and i' m wondering  if the second part, which is scheduled to be released on the 26th,will automatically update on the version i' m currently playing. and i 've been eagerly awaiting shift 2,i 'm rrrrrrrrrally excited about it ! (detail :i' m Chinese,  if there are any false with my words, please correct me, LLLLLLLOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!

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HELLO POOKIE :3 thank you so much for your enthusiasm!! :3 no it wont automatically update because i have no idea how to do it xD but dont worry, you will be able to skip the dialogues on shift 1!! :3 LOVE UUUUUUUUUU TOO MUCH!!!!

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Alright, i got it:3:3:3!!!

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I'M GOING TO COMBUST I just dicovered this AMAZING VN with such interesting characters and IT TURNS OUT IT WILL B UPDATES IN 3 DAYS????? I HAVE BEEN BLESSED THANK YOU CREATOR I LOVE YOU

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AWWWWW LOVE YOU TOO POOKIE :3<3

<3<3<3

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YAY YAY, SHIFT 2 IS IN 3 DAYS RAAAHHHH I CAN WAIT!!!!! (maybe ill record my playthrough + voiceover and DM it on Twitter if i find ur account) IM LITERALLY SO EXITED! and male Y/N will be back 0_0, still have a good day, night, doesnt matter its 11:30 pm here!

AAAAAAAAAAAAA dw i will share my twitter on 26!! :3 have a good day pookie ^^

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LANE IS SO CUTE EHUEHEHEHE i love him im so exited for shift 2 !!

he is a cute little brat x) youll see hes kinda annoying in shift 2 xDDDD

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Heyyyyy sweetie :) , I've played lots of visual novels, but yours completely captivated me, from the plot to the characters. Your art is magnificent, and I couldn't help but show my support. Also, if needed, I'd be more than happy to help with the Italian translation. X <3

awww thank you pookie thats so sweet!! :3 <3<3 id be very happy for an italian translation!! :3

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The following content was translated using software, so there might be some awkward phrasing here and there >_<


Hello, do you have any plans for a Chinese translation? I really like this game. While playing on the computer, I've been using DeepSeek on my phone to assist with translation, manually typing each sentence to help me understand the story, but it's very slow.


(Just asking, hope this doesn’t pressure you!) This is a very interesting game—I really love the characters in it! (ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧ Wishing you smooth progress with your creative work in the end!" 


By the way, I'd like to ask what '<3' means because it's not commonly used in my country("Maybe it's also because I rarely use software.") (ヘ>_<ヘ). Also, where is the author from? (♡>𖥦<)♥

hello pookie thank you so much! :3 WHAT YOU REALLY TRANSLATED THE SENTENCES ONE BY ONE? O_o you have a LOT of patience! no worries the game will be translated in chinese by copiklaGrogu (theyve done the translation of shift 1 already) 

by the way "<3" is just a heart xDD i come from France and we use it a lot :3 <3 <3 sending love for you <3

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XD  <3<3<3

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Hello, is there a Russian translation planned? I would really like to play, but I doubt my English skills. :"[

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yes there will be one!! :3 its currently in the work by Alisa_p.a. :3 <3

it is wonderful :"3 ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

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будет:) перевод в активной фазе!) и не заставит себя долго ждать:) (пока можешь глянуть другую игру с моим переводом)

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ГОСПОДИ ЭТО ТАК ЗАМЕЧАТЕЛЬНО :")))
Я вам руки целовала вот честное слово, рада, что есть такие ребята как вы :3

было бы хоть за что) я же все равно один только текст перевожу, а разработчик наш сама будет текст в игру оформлять, я то не владею навыками программирования:( 

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Я всё равно считаю ваш  труд значимым) Мало людей которые берутся за переводы для ру комьюнити, поэтому я благодарна каждому такому человечку  как вы.  Даже если отсутствуют навыки программирования, то что вы делаете, тоже непростой труд:3
Кстати, не подскажите, каков примерный прогноз выхода перевода? :0

ох! спасибо за такие прекрасные слова! еще вторую часть итоговую надо мне перевести у второй смены, а дальше нам разработчик уже скажет о выходе перевода 1 и 2 смены) так почти всё готово!

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Is there ever going to be a chance for anypov? :3 ALSO I LOVE THE ARTSTYLE SMMM!!! I love how biker boy turns to the side whenever he gets embarrassed it's adorablex x33

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AWWW THANK UU SWEETIE<3<3 yes there will be some anypov, they will be necessary to understand what happened! :3

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AHHH that's awesome!! :3 It sucks a little when you're stuck with specific pronouns TwT I can't wait for the update, I'm sure it'll be awesome >:D

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the MC will still be a woman (i think i didnt understand the question fully LMFAO...) but i meant you will be able to see the story as "someone else" xD i am sorry about the confusion... 

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im sorry.... *-*

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YALL HEAR (see) THAT?? SHIFT TWO EEEEYEYYEEKK (lil doodle of mr bb (IDK HOW TO DRAW HELMETS OK IM SORRY (╥_╥)
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LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOO I LOVE THISSSSSSSSSS xDDD THANK YOU SMMMM SWEETIE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THE HELMET MAKES ME LAUGH SM LMFAOO XDDD PLZZZZ i wanna put your drawing in shift 2 can you tell me your credit SWEETIEEEE <3<3<3

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UWAA OF COURSE YOU CAN ( ´ ꒳ ` ) you cn credit my by my itch.io tag or my tt which is just ziet.otx !!IM SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT AHAA I LOVE UR WORK SMM!! (´꒳`)♡

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NOTED POOKIE I WILL PUT BOTH :3<3 LOVE UUU

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SORRYYYY AAAAAAAA

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The new Game Page update is so cool! The cover art is especially awesome <3

awwww THANK YOU POOKIE :3<3

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He's so—— adorable!! I tried drawing an interaction (?) The vending machine scene was really cute! When I saw the update on the 26th, my excitement went through the roof!!! I can’t wait for the upcoming story—— I'll be patiently waiting for the update!!

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THIS IS AMAZINGGGGGG OMGGGG *O* HE IS SO BIG AND CUTE :3<3 thank you so much pookie thats beautiful!! i will put it in shift 2 if thats okay :33 i see there is your X acc thats perfect :3 i am so excited to release it!!! <3

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OMG Of course!!! This is such an honor Aaaaa (*´I`*)💖 I’ll follow you forever, LOVELOVELOVE!!!

LOVE UUUUUU :3<3<3

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im so excited to see how shift 2 turns out!!!!

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Amazing painting character illustration...amazing plot... I'm full of anticipation for the following story....Pls, I cant wait

thank you so much pookie!! i hope i wont disappoint!! :33<3

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so excited for shift 2!!

ME TOO AAAAAA CANT WAIT FOR YOU TO PLAYYY :33

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Damn this free? Lol i need that for Android 

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i will figure out how to build an android version xD! 

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THANK U SO MUCHHHHHH

 MUAK :3

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Can't wait to see our pookiessss <333

YESSSS!! :3

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会出在线版吗就是能在网页上玩的那种 有时候电脑不在身边 ꒦ິ^꒦ິ

i will try making one too! :3 

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被回复了!!~( ੭•͈ω•͈)੭๐♡.๐

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SHIFT 2 IM SO EXCITED <3333

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YIP YIP HURRA SHIFT 2 SOON WE WOOONN

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;-; no mobile?

i will try learning how to do it!! i see a lot of ppl want a mobile version!! ^^

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OK thanks ^_^

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pls make an android version

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I wanna play this game so bad

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i dont know how to do it i am so sorry pookie :(

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yyyyayyyy!!!

YIPEEEEE :3

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